Sunday, January 18, 2009
Tests are coming!
Monday, January 12, 2009
The Ends of Classes!
Wednesday, January 7, 2009
Ten-minute post: This year's aim!
First, I am determined to get a higher score on TOEIC test. Besides, I want to challenge the Japanese and English examination. I am going to take a course of studying for a public test of a Japanese teacher.
I am thinking about going to a driving school sometime in this year. It will enable me to get more freedom. Ha ha! I am thinking whether I can get some qualifications. It is also good to get the qualification of a teacher of piano.
Anyway, I am determined to study much harder than last year! I have so many things to do!
But the most important priorities for me are learning English and Chinese. I will be careful not to lose the first aim, which I came to this university for!
Ten-minute post: Looking back my last year...
One of the most important events is visiting and homestay in California in USA. It was a great experience for me, because I learned the importance of communicating hard if I was not fluent in English. It was first time that I went to go other countries by myself, and I got a confidence about myself. It was excellent memory!
One of the reason why I was so busy last year was that I took the course to be a Japanese teacher. I have to attend the course twice a week from 6:00 to 7:30. I was tired last year because of it, but it will benefit me!
The last event in my university was the speech contest. I was determined to join it and decided what to talk about at almost last time. I did not have so much time to prepare, but I could win the department chair prise.
Looking back my last year, I think it was not a bad year. This year, I will
Monday, January 5, 2009
Classes Burst! Run to the End!
Wednesday, December 17, 2008
Portfolio: Second Semester
Until December 22
Section 1a
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
| 1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates yy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words) | Website Review: Let's take in Fresh English! | 08.09.27 | 6 | 380 | 6 | 1 | 0 | 0 |
| Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words) | Essay: ~~ my second home ~~ | 08.10.11 | 4 | 493 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words) | MR2-01: "Mrs. Doubt" ― Live with Love and Humor ☆ | 08.11.01 | 5 | 452 | 4 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Community life 08.11.17 (default length*) | Essay2-02: ~Walk in line~ (Community life) | 08.11.16 | 6 | 610 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶) | Essay2-03: ○●Secret of Kumamoto●○ | 08.11.30 | 4 | 434 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶) | Essay: Learning with computers! | 08.12.12 | 7 | 503 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Totals | --- | --- | 32 | 2872 | 10 | 1 | 0 | 0 |
Key:
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- I think the best essay in this semester is "Essay2-02: ~Walk in line~ (Community life)". It is because it shows the main points so clearly. Besides, it has a good conclusion paragraph. The readers can feel the march of time.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | 0 | - | - | - |
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | Mrs.doubt fire essay | 08.11.04 | 88 | "You share a great analysis especially in the third paragraph!" Specific praise |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | MR2-01: "Mrs. Doubt" ― Live with Love and Humor ☆ | 08.11.05 | 88 | "Which is more important for you, humor or love?" An interesting question. |
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Website Review: Let's take in Fresh English! | 08.09.27 | 131 | "The BBC site you elected is good and it's one of way to build up our English skill.It's nice idea,jam!" Friendly! |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.10.01 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 97 | "Thank you for your all comments!" and answered all questions. Thankful and informative |
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | MR2-01: "Mrs. Doubt" ― Live with Love and Humor ☆ | 08.11.01 | 154 | "your essay is really easy to read because first paragraph tells me what you want to write below paragraphs." So specific comment |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.11.12 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 46 | "I...think...love is more important. Everything does have no meaning without love!" (answered a question and shared my opinion) Informative and thankful |
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.- My blog displays them at the top in a sidebar. It is because I want them to be encouragements for me that others look into my blog!
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- I appreciated the comments which shows specific advice.
- The comments which refer to good points concretely became encouragements for me.
3.0. Book Reviews
| 3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
| Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
| 2-01 | BR2-01: The Joke Machine | 08.08.01 | 147 | 0 |
| 2-02 | BR2-02: Roman Adventure | 08.08.05 | 133 | 0 |
| 2-03 | BR2-03: Submarine Adventure | 08.08.05 | 210 | 0 |
| 2-04 | BR2-04: Chinese Adventure | 08.08.08 | 161 | 0 |
| 2-05 | BR2-05: Flood! ) -: | 08.09.28 | 151 | 0 |
| 2-06 | BR2-06: The Three Little Pigs (-: | 08.09.28 | 108 | 0 |
| 2-07 | BR2-07: The Fox and the Crow ( -- : | 08.09.28 | 124 | 0 |
| 2-08 | BR2-08: The Hare and the Tortoise ( - : | 08.09.28 | 108 | 0 |
| 2-09 | BR2-09: The Blue Eye ( - : | 08.10.07 | 172 | 0 |
| 2-10 | BR2-10: Superdog | 08.10.19 | 194 | 0 |
| 2-11 | BR2-11: Sara Says No! | 08.11.14 | 245 | 0 |
| 2-12 | BR2-12: The Umbrella | 08.12.06 | 306 | 0 |
| 2-13 | BR2-13: The Barcelona Game | 08.12.17 | 444 | 0 |
| 2-14 | BR2-14: Photo Finish | 08.12.18 | 140 | 0 |
| 2-15 | BR2-15:Shooting Stars | 08.12.18 | 120 | 0 |
| 2-16 | BR2-16: In the Frame | 08.12.18 | 129 | 0 |
| 2-17 | BR2-17: The Big Bag Mistake | 08.12.20 | 156 | 0 |
| 2-18 | BR2-18: THE LAST PHOTO | 08.12.21 | 194 | 0 |
| --- | --- | Totals: | 3242 | 0 |
Note
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
・I think my best book review is "BR2-18: THE LAST PHOTO ". It is because it includes my opinion and questions, instead of a long story plot. Besides, it is so easy to read.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | ○ | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
| 4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
| 5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
| ○ | |
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| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
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| 4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | ○ | |
| ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
I'm sorry, but I produced none. | --- |
4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.- To emphasize particular words related to the main points in each post, I changed the size and colors of those words.
- I always tried to share my own opinions on book reviews' posts.
- I included more space in each post than before, in order to make them easy to see.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it
- Sudden homework(essays) was a little tough to complete by the due, after we were told about those essays just on Wednesday.
- The set number of posts in a week seemed to be too many.
- However, I was used to working on my blog in fall semester!
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
- To reach the norm of 15,000 words, the key is your efforts during summer vacation!
- You had better use easy phrases, so that others can understand what you write.
- To make your blog interesting and informative, it is a good idea to write about your opinions or the unique traditions and culture of Japan.
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).
///// End of template (copy from here to "Beginning ..." [above]) /////Friday, December 12, 2008
Essay: Learning with computers!
What are problems we face? First of all, think of the complexity. When some instruction is presented on the screen, we do not always know what to do. In some cases, the computer does not work fast or properly. These can be very confusing situations. Besides, we must be cautious about the physical influence. The screen exhausts our eyes. We are likely to feel pain on our neck, shoulder and head. We should be careful about the posture.
Let’s focus on what we can do with computers. By using them, we can be connected with other people, especially through the Internet. We can use an e-mail system and Skype and communicate with our friends even overseas. This way is much easier, quicker and in low prices than other ways, like phone calls and letters. If we have our own blog on the Internet, we can post whatever we want to share with others and get comments from others.
By using the Internet, we can access so much information. When we need to write reports and make presentations, we use the Internet to get the latest info. Also, we find out the meanings or conceptions of what we don’t know. It shows people’s opinions and ideas too. Of course, we have to remember the info is sometimes incorrect.
We have so many useful applications. Especially, I use MS Word, whenever I write reports. I think it is essential in every student’s life. Besides, if we remember how to use Excel, it can be one of the really useful tools. Now that the blind typing skill is necessary, we might want to practice it. We can do it too with a computer. It is also possible to enjoy sites of typing practice and studying English for free on the Internet. Many people visit the YouTube homepage and enjoy movies and music for free.
The computer is very helpful to arrange photographs and enables us to reminisce about good memories. It is possible to set the picture on the screen and make your own space. We can charge an iPod and edit the content of it. The computers have so many functions. It is just up to you.
Now that our world is flooded with computers, we need to know what we can do with them. As I refer in this essay, computers have so many functions. Though they are really helpful, I feel the need of caution. A computer could be called ‘time thief’, don’t you think so? I want to find more ways of making the most of them, not using by computers!
[503 words]
Outline for Next Essay!
● Introduction
* Challenges
* Communication- blog, class, e-mail and Skype
* Information- Internet, research
* Useful application- Excel, PowerPoint, Typing programs and Word.
Blogs, typing practice sites, free sites, Skype, YouTube.
* Other Stuff
● Conclusion
Wednesday, December 10, 2008
Keywords of next essay!
function
application
challenges
freeze
time thief
tired eyes
Internet
music
knowledge
unreliably
unsafe
virus
information
study
benefit
arrange and save info
write reports
make PowerPoint
use Excel
[words]
Free writing: Learning with computers
In fact, however, there are so many useful functions with computers. They can benefit us, when they are used in a proper way. We can be connected with other people by e-mail or skype. It is also possible to research out, get so much info, use study homepages and get music on the Internet. MS programs enable us to calcurate figures, arrange and save the info we get, make poewerpoint, make presentations and write reports for the classes.
Brainstorming: Learning with computers
Tuesday, October 7, 2008
▼△ Zhong-wen 中文 △▼
Saturday, September 27, 2008
Website Review: Let's take in Fresh English!
Hi, everyone in the Foreign Languages Department! Are you trying hard to learn English? I know, of course, you are trying. How do you study English, then? Recently, I had been thinking about how to learn English, though that is just my intimate affair. I was anxious about my learning English, because some of my friends are to go study abroad next year, but I’m not. I found the good materials in the BBC’s web site, so I would like to introduce it this time.
BBC stands for British Broadcasting Corporation. My favorite point about this web site is that it has English learning program. There are so many sites just with English games on the Internet. This site also has many games for kids, but not only that. At the bottom of the page, it has a corner that “Explore the BBC”. You can choose a link, “Learning English” in it. If you click on it, it shows lists with many items, like “NEWS ENGLISH”, “QUIZZES AND EXAMS”, “GRAMMER & VOCABULARY”, and “BUSINESS ENGLISH”.
This time, I will recommend you to use the part of “GRAMMER & VOCABULARY”. You will find an item, “Pronunciation>>”. It has video with a native English speaker. She explained what the good pronunciation is and why we need to learn such a kind of pronunciation. Her British English is so nice and clear, and her advice becomes a good encouragement for us. It must be inducements to you to learn English and make your pronunciation better and clearer.
It will help you to learn modern and practical English! Besides, you might want to get knowledge about world news. You can also listen to the English news stories with video and audio. It makes it possible for you to learn how to express new things in English, that is, new coinages which are used in the modern world.
I am thinking of making use of this site too. We need to take in fresh English in order to communicate in this modern and global society. You agree with it, don’t you? I want to keep trying to make a progress in English like everyone. I will show the address of this web site below, so please check it out! You won’t regret it.
[380 words]
Saturday, July 12, 2008
Study!
[40 words ― total 13265 words]
Sunday, June 29, 2008
What I think about Blogging
I think it is helpful for us in order to keep writing regularly, but it is tough, because we are usually pushed for time. I am busy, so it is not easy to switched the computer on and think about what to write every day. However, I think everyone else is also busy, so I will do my best for blogging this year.
[121 words ― total 12072 words]
Friday, June 27, 2008
Vocabulary → Communication
She will give me new words every week, and I must try to memorise them as homework. The plan has started, and there are words about foods and drinks this week. For example, hot dogs, hamburgers, spaghetti, sandwiches, pizzas, salads, cakes, ice creams, coffee, tea, cola, beer, juice. This homework might get harder next week, but I will try!
[104 words ― total 11951 words]
Portfolio: THE CORPUS of SPRING SEMESTER!
Student ID: 07104
your student no.)
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
[embed your proto-portfolios here]
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below[.]) | 1.1. Showcase | Short titles [+ links] | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| Self-introduction 08.04.20 (250 words) | Writing 3 practice | 2008.04.09 | 2 | 356 | 2 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Movie review 08.05.04 (300 words) | MR1-1: How to built a good friendship | 2008.05.03 | 4 | 718 | 0 | 0 | 3 | 0 |
| University life 08.05.18 (350 words) | Essay: University Life | 2008.05.17 | 6 | 546 | 10 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Another review 08.06.01 (400 words) | Review 1-04 (Travel): Visit the land of Parisienne! | 2008.06.01 | 5 | 450 | 5 | 0 | 4 | 0 |
| Language learning history 08.06.15 (450 words) | Essay: To know others & To know myself ! | 2008.06.14 | 5 | 588 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| 5th essay (pending) TBA | ||||||||
| Totals | --- | --- | 22 | 2658 | 18 | 0 | 7 | 0 |
Key:
M: number of other media embedded
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- I think my best essay is "Essay: University Life", because it includes my goals for my four years! No aims, no life. It is the same in university life, isn't it? I will not lose the reasons why I came here. Besides, this essay shows the points most definitely. It is also an encouragement for me!
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | Best Reviews 1.1 (2008): Best [Post] Title (probably) | 2008.06.04 | 26 words | Easy to understand |
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | Currrrrrry and rice:9 | 2008.07.08 | 49 words | Cheerful and friendly |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | SUMMER☆ | 2008.07.08 | 52 words | Friendly |
2.4. Most comments on: | Essay: University Life | 2008.05.21 | 294 words | Original and friendly |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Essay: University Life | 2008.05.21 | 294 words | Original and friendly |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2008.05.21 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 162 words | Quickly and in detail |
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | 中文上課! | 2008.05.28 | 37 words | Lively |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2008.05.30 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 15 words | Friendly |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?- My blog displays recent comments at the top of the sidebar. It is because that recent comments are renewed most frequently. If they are on the top, it is easier to look at them.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- If my classmate put a comment on my blog, it becomes an encouragement for me. I think comments are good.
3.0. Book Reviews
| 3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
| Example: | Vampire Killer | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
| 1-01 | BK1-01: Newspaper boy | 2008.04.05 | 104 | 0 |
| 1-02 | BK1-02: Pocket Money | 2008.04.22 | 168 | 0 |
| 1-03 | BK1-03: The Broken Roof | 2008.04.23 | 163 | 0 |
| 1-04 | BK1-04: Don't Be Silly | 2008.04.28 | 122 | 0 |
| 1-05 | BK1-05: Dog in School | 2008.05.04 | 175 | 0 |
| 1-06 | BR1-06: Victorian Adventure | 2008.05.14 | 114 | 0 |
| 1-07 | BR1-07: The Outing! | 2008.05.17 | 108 | 0 |
| 1-08 | BR1-08: The New Baby | 2008.06.06 | 113 | 0 |
| 1-09 | BR1-09: The New House | 2008.06.06 | 126 | 0 |
| 1-10 | BK1-10: The Storm | 2008.06.06 | 140 | 0 |
| 1-11 | BR1-11: From Curry to Rice | 2008.06.15 | 174 | 0 |
| 1-12 | BR1-12: The Lost Key | 2008.06.20 | 172 | 0 |
BR1-13: Save Floppy! | 2008.06.26 | 130 | 0 | |
| --- | --- | TOTALS: | 1809 | 0 |
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- I think my best book review is BR1-09: The New House. It is because I wrote about my own experience and my hope, not about the book.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog have an archive? | ○ | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
| 4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
| 5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
| ○ | |
| ○ | |
| ○ | |
| ○ | |
| ○ | |
| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
| 4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? | ○ | |
| ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.- ... Layout of the template: I changed it at the tuen of seasons and fitted it to each season.
- ... To be regular: I tried to post on my blog almost everyday.
- ... Informative content: I included my own opinions. For example, I wrote about my own experience and hopes in book reviews, not only the story plots.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
- ... To write diaries every day was so hard for me. It is because I am busy and not used to writing every day. However, I think it was helpful for my English now. To think about the design of my blog is pleasant, but it is on the Internet. That point bothers us, because we need to protect the private information carefully.
6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
- ... I think what is important is to try to post diaries and book reviews early in a semester. Short posts are also okay, if we keep trying to write on our blogs.
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)