●Intro
▶Introduction of my neighborhood
▶ 〃 my group
●Body
▶My impression at first
▶When I was a junior kid
・The time for gathering
・Keeping order in a group
・Be sleepy in morning
・Joint responsibility
▶After I became a senior (a kind of tradition)
・A vice leader → A leader
・Sense of responsibility
・Taking care of juniors (selfish or sweet)
●Conclusion
▶Summarize the main points
▶My opinion
・Now many kids join their own groups for safety in Japan
・The importance of getting along with other members
・The influence on everyday life
I have to think of some catchy title too! It is also important. Now that I arranged the contents and the order, I am ready for writing next essay!
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1 comment:
This looks quite interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing your essay!
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